A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
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A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
This just kinda came to me. I've been in a rut lately, and I can tell who the people are in the last stanza for me =P.
That is maybe my seventh poem that I have ever written in my entire life, so idk/idc if it is good, but i'd like if you told me what you think.
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- When one shies away,
Will the other stay,
Though all alone,
Be that as it may.
When one leaves the path,
Strikes out on his own,
Will the other follow,
Into the great unknown.
When one tries something new,
What will the others say,
Like when the first man flew,
And he tried something by himself.
When one goes out on his own,
By himself and all alone,
Will any others back him,
Or will they want to shun him?
When one strikes a new way,
All is unknown,
What can happen may,
When one is alone.
When the other decides to come,
That sets the people from friends,
When he will do unlike some,
And follow you into the abyss,
That is what a true friend is.
That is maybe my seventh poem that I have ever written in my entire life, so idk/idc if it is good, but i'd like if you told me what you think.
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
i actualy write a lot of poems, so i can tell u its pretty dang good dude. dont be discouraged. keep writting!
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
lol, okay. I made an account on the Realm of Gaming
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Its great, you should write more poems, and poems = songs, lol. Keep writing more poems, but try writing a song or two too maybe.
Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
I'll stick to poems atm, lol.
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Lol, ok. They're pretty much the same thing, except when I write them, I know half of what its going to sound like already (Not that I can sing...lol).
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Some how, rether Kamo can or not, with her personatlity, i cant even IMAGINE her singing...i just cant. lol.
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Oh, I see how it is! Lol, just kidding. I dunno whether I can sing or not, never really tried. It doesn't sound fun, y' know? Lol.
Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
I speak for kiros sake when i say dont start
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
I find it very unwise insulting someone you've never even met before.
Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Its very unwise to give some one advise whom you've never met before...O.O lol jk, sorry.
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Lol, I'm gone for the day to program, and I come back to find that my thread has become a battle field o.O
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Its not a battlefield, but I don't take well to someone flaming someone else on my forum, especially my friends and myself. All I stated was the truth: You shouldn't insult people who you've never met because you never know who they are. Its a fact. Just imagine if I were George W. Bush, or Hilary Clinton...
(Note: I'm not, I'm just saying.)
(Note: I'm not, I'm just saying.)
Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Thank god... LOL JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDING, SORRY! I don't fight, I just like making jokes at people because it's funny, (IMO xD) lol. If you want a battlefield see Kiro's schedule (lol it'd be really funny if kamo didn't comment negatively on that...) just kidding...none of my insults are extremely insulting anyway, so who cares? Anyway I'll tone it down abit...for a trade that kamo tries to be happy once and a while. Here's a slideshow on how you do it, in case your don't know how ---> Lol. just kidding again! xD. bear with me xD. lol.
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Ah, now it's a battlefield of apologies...lol..
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Re: A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08
Lol, it's okay Kamo..
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