The Expeditions Of Explorer Sarlayter - Preview - 3/1/08

I hate it! Mamoe always asks me, “Don’t you have anything better to do than all those pity magic games?” and my Papoe,” Son, why don’t you go play some sacoo with your friends?” They should just mnd their own business!
Well, on one of those days mom asked me her impossible question, I yelled,” I do! I am going to travel the world!” Mamoe started chuckeling, and Papoe, who was standing I the doorway walked in, put his arm around his wife’s waist and let out a big hearty laugh. “HaHaHa! You have no experience in travel! Maybe if you were a Golden Child!” Suddenly serious he said,” Son, tavel is no joke. How ‘bout you never mention it again?”
hope you liked my sneak peak. more coming later. hope you like it.

Yeah, can't wait for the rest!

Rofl. Not bad, BUT how bout saying its a preview FIRST:?: ? I thought that this was real life and I'm like, why is this loser telling us about her life ? Lol! I was so shocked when I read bottom. Not bad, though, sounds decent. If you need help, (thought most people are secretive about their novels, I understand..) in anything, contact me, I got uber free time and I'm ready for anything!! Ciao!

PS: Maybe a little more explanation on how she asked, and what is her impossible question? Cause, it's just like, BAM, right away, no foreshadowing or warning. Still, not bad, i suggest you fix that, and be sure to read my novel posted on this site too! I need more opinion!!

It seems Fionna isn't very active, but I know she is much farther than this (She's a friend).