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Mine - The Worst Song I've Ever Written

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Post by kamokronos Thu May 15, 2008 12:18 am

I wrote this song last week, and it has to be the worst one I've ever written. In fact, I don't even know WHY I wrote it. I just wrote it down real quick, and I thought "Oh, what the heck, its in my stack of papers right here, and I'm typing the best one I've written so far, so why not type the worst..." so here I am, posting it, lol. Btw, its called "Mine".

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Everyday I take a walk in the park
But time keeps passing by, its already dark
I see your face on the other side of the street
And then I think what I wouldn't give to meet

But by the time the thought crosses my mind
Your already half way across the grind
Maybe its just a subtle sign
But I know, I wanna make you mine

Seeing those eyes
I can hear my own sighs
Becuase I know you'll never be mine
And now we'll never shine

Oh, I look at my reflection
And I see a section...of water
With your smiling face and
Your standing right beside me

Yeah, you take my hand
And we walk arm in arm
Oh, smile for smile
I realize I'm in love

But by the time the thought crosses my mind
Your already half way across the grind
Maybe its just a subtle sign
But I know, I wanna make you mine

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Post by Digger412 Thu May 15, 2008 2:05 am

It is good. I wouldn't call it your worse (believe me--I've read horrible), but I wouldn't say that it's you best either. Same longing, lol. That seems to be in every song..maybe that is just how you write, or maybe it's just a girl thing...idk really, I've never had a sneak peek into a girl's life, but I can imagine lol. *looks at Bella* bet you I could last a day =P.

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