Never Enough Time - So Far The Best I've Written :D

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Never Enough Time - So Far The Best I've Written :D

Post by kamokronos on Wed May 14, 2008 11:04 pm

Well, I had a lot of time in Language Arts today, so instead, I wrote "Never Enough Time", lol. Hope you guys enjoy this and tell me what you think.

Spoiler:
I'm standing right outisde the park
Frozen there, no, I can't walk
I watch ever so helplessly
As time keeps going on and on

I watch you pass in front of me
But you don't seem to see
Your face wrinkled, worn with age
And I feel like I'm locked in a cage

I watch as time is passin' by
Helpless, hopeless, I just wanna cry
I don't how much time has passed
But I know that I won't last

Cuz there's never enough time
To be who you wanna be
To do what you wanna do
Or to cry when you wanna cry

I keep on watching the future
Like sittin' and watching T.V.
But I realize its not something to enjoy
As I watch my friends die in front of me

Lessons learned, time stops going so fast
But I still don't how much time has passed
I only know I can't go back
To the way things always, always used to be

Cuz there's never enough time
To be who you wanna be
To do who you wanna do
Or to cry when you wanna cry

And there's never enough time
For you and I


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Post by Digger412 on Wed May 14, 2008 11:35 pm

Wow, another good song. I seem to detect a bit of longing, lol. All of your songs seem to subtley give off that emotion. I'm no therapist though, so idk. I really like it, not my exact cuppa tea, but it's great.

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Post by kamokronos on Wed May 14, 2008 11:43 pm

Thanks, but I don't know what you mean by "Longing"...and I don't need a therapist, lol. I'm just writing songs that pop into my head, y' know. There's a bit of inspiration, but it's just like, today I was really bored so the exact opposite of what I was feeling popped into my head, lol. But now I have a big project due next week and I'm just starting it Sad Never enough time for big projects Very Happy. What is your "Cuppa Tea" because I wanna write all kinds of songs, maybe one that'd fit under your category, lol.

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