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A True Friend | First Poem by Digger412 | 5/9/08

Post by Digger412 on Sat May 10, 2008 3:03 am

This just kinda came to me. I've been in a rut lately, and I can tell who the people are in the last stanza for me =P.

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When one shies away,
Will the other stay,
Though all alone,
Be that as it may.

When one leaves the path,
Strikes out on his own,
Will the other follow,
Into the great unknown.

When one tries something new,
What will the others say,
Like when the first man flew,
And he tried something by himself.

When one goes out on his own,
By himself and all alone,
Will any others back him,
Or will they want to shun him?

When one strikes a new way,
All is unknown,
What can happen may,
When one is alone.

When the other decides to come,
That sets the people from friends,
When he will do unlike some,
And follow you into the abyss,
That is what a true friend is.

That is maybe my seventh poem that I have ever written in my entire life, so idk/idc if it is good, but i'd like if you told me what you think.

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Post by DQMJ4Ever-NeverPlayedHalo on Sat May 10, 2008 3:25 am

i actualy write a lot of poems, so i can tell u its pretty dang good dude. dont be discouraged. keep writting!

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Post by Digger412 on Sat May 10, 2008 3:36 am

lol, okay. I made an account on the Realm of Gaming

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Post by kamokronos on Sat May 10, 2008 4:05 am

Its great, you should write more poems, and poems = songs, lol. Keep writing more poems, but try writing a song or two too maybe.

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Post by Digger412 on Sat May 10, 2008 4:22 am

I'll stick to poems atm, lol.

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Post by kamokronos on Sat May 10, 2008 4:23 am

Lol, ok. They're pretty much the same thing, except when I write them, I know half of what its going to sound like already (Not that I can sing...lol).

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Post by Digger412 on Sun May 11, 2008 1:24 am

Lol, okay.

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Post by DQMJ4Ever-NeverPlayedHalo on Sun May 11, 2008 2:25 am

Some how, rether Kamo can or not, with her personatlity, i cant even IMAGINE her singing...i just cant. lol.

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Post by kamokronos on Sun May 11, 2008 2:30 am

Oh, I see how it is! Lol, just kidding. I dunno whether I can sing or not, never really tried. It doesn't sound fun, y' know? Lol.

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Post by DQMJ4Ever-NeverPlayedHalo on Sun May 11, 2008 2:31 am

I speak for kiros sake when i say dont start Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

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Post by kamokronos on Sun May 11, 2008 3:26 am

I find it very unwise insulting someone you've never even met before.

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Post by DQMJ4Ever-NeverPlayedHalo on Sun May 11, 2008 3:53 am

Its very unwise to give some one advise whom you've never met before...O.O lol jk, sorry.

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Post by Digger412 on Mon May 12, 2008 2:09 am

Lol, I'm gone for the day to program, and I come back to find that my thread has become a battle field o.O

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Post by kamokronos on Mon May 12, 2008 2:24 am

Its not a battlefield, but I don't take well to someone flaming someone else on my forum, especially my friends and myself. All I stated was the truth: You shouldn't insult people who you've never met because you never know who they are. Its a fact. Just imagine if I were George W. Bush, or Hilary Clinton...Very Happy

(Note: I'm not, I'm just saying.)

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Post by DQMJ4Ever-NeverPlayedHalo on Mon May 12, 2008 2:30 am

Thank god... LOL JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDING, SORRY! I don't fight, I just like making jokes at people because it's funny, (IMO xD) lol. If you want a battlefield see Kiro's schedule (lol it'd be really funny if kamo didn't comment negatively on that...) just kidding...none of my insults are extremely insulting anyway, so who cares? Anyway I'll tone it down abit...for a trade that kamo tries to be happy once and a while. Here's a slideshow on how you do it, in case your don't know how ---> Laughing Lol. just kidding again! xD. bear with me xD. lol.

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Post by kamokronos on Mon May 12, 2008 2:20 pm

I don't get it...

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Post by DQMJ4Ever-NeverPlayedHalo on Mon May 12, 2008 3:22 pm

lol...xD

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Post by Digger412 on Mon May 12, 2008 9:51 pm

Ah, now it's a battlefield of apologies...lol..

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Post by DQMJ4Ever-NeverPlayedHalo on Mon May 12, 2008 11:42 pm

lol...?

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Post by kamokronos on Mon May 12, 2008 11:54 pm

You both lost me...

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Post by Digger412 on Tue May 13, 2008 12:17 am

Lol, it's okay Kamo..

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Post by kamokronos on Tue May 13, 2008 1:00 am

Umm...ok...

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